i don't like the cold.
it bites my fingers, nibbles my toes
[an exciting pinch and a cute red nose]
it turns life-giving water to sharp, slippery ice
[an occasion for new adventure, a little spice for this life]
the birds fly south, fall's colors fade
[the mosquitoes go away, the bear to his cave]
i remember hard long days working in freezing weather
[and happy long nights of fun and fellowship together]
we build a fire so we don't freeze
[and share stories and songs over spice tea]
the bonfire burns while the cold freezes me
[like hot chocolate and real snow cones - a delightful dichotomy!]
how i dream for spring so this snow will melt
[but without the cold, is warm truly felt?]
the ice cold heart of this world weighs on my face
[but love glows warm and draws me into its embrace]
[i like the cold]
- Krichotomy
LucidShadowDreamer
That's a really good poem o.O!
Well done :O
Also, I missed this earlier, but it's nice to see something from you, as it has been a while :)
Krichotomy
Health problems. I'm so broken. But somehow managing an overall positive outlook and strong will to live regardless. Heh.
This is actually a really old poem of mine, but one of my favorites. :)